Elephants are so big and fat
That's why their feet are flat
What do you think of my poem?
Pretty good at the age
Reply:Sorry I thought you wanted criticism. Report It
Reply:It is okay if you like it short i perfer a tab bit longer.
Reply:Very short but it rhymes very weell good job.
Reply:lol
Reply:Don't berate me, but I feel you need a little more substance and subtlety.
Reply:Don't leave it at that
Work a bit on that
Reply:Nice try.....!!!!
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